Talk:Patty Loveless/GA1
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Reviewer: ChrisTofu11961 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
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Good job with this article on improving it. I think if you make the changes below, it will pass no problem.
- It is reasonably well written.
- I edited grammar for you. I find it helpful when someone else does it for me so I did the same for you.
- The infobox does not need any references except for the "genres" section. I was told this by 2 other editors who have reviewed my articles (I removed it for you).
- The lead requires more about Loveless's legacy. Multiple journalists have named her among country's most respected artists. I think this could be added to the first or second sentence in the lead. There is a way to make this language not sound fan heavy. This could be referenced in a legacy section (see below).
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- Not every section needs to be split by albums. This makes more sense for artists like Meghan Trainor who have less than ten albums. Loveless has a lot. I think you should synthesize these sections more. I modeled the first one for you (1986-87 section). Consider merging Honky Tonk Angel with Up Against My Heart (both could be combined). Albums on Epic between 1993 and 1996 could also be combined. Also consider re-titling these sections so that they align better with Loveless's career path (example: "Career re-launch at Epic" could replaced all the album titles as headings)
- This artist requires a "legacy" section. Multiple artists have been influenced by Loveless's work. Many journalists and artists have cited her as one of the genre's most respected artists. This would be beneficial to include.
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- There are more images of Patty Loveless on Wiki commons that need to be taken advantage of. I added one that is from the 1990s. But there is more. The one you had in the infobox is too big. I would put that somewhere else.
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- @ChrisTofu11961: I think I got everything here. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 23:57, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
- You're all set, congrats! ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 00:07, 23 November 2022 (UTC)