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WTPHYSICS notice about DRAFT article Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Patchy Particle
[edit]Per WT:PHYSICS, it has been suggested that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Patchy Particle be merged here -- 67.70.35.44 (talk) 12:20, 11 October 2014 (UTC)
Dear physics experts: I came across an old AfC submission, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Patchy Particle, that will soon be deleted as a stale draft. It appears to be about the same topic as Patchy particles, but the information and description of the subject is quite different. Is there anything that should be merged from the draft into the mainspace article? —Anne Delong (talk) 04:33, 11 October 2014 (UTC)
- It looks like the article (particles) is just a list of different forms, whereas the draft (particle) actually talks about how they are formed (albeit not very well). The draft (specifically the last two paragraphs) should be merged into the article as a new section after cleanup. Unfortunately I'm fairly busy at the moment so I can't take care of it myself. Primefac (talk) 09:27, 11 October 2014 (UTC)
- I have tightened up the text a little. If these two paragraphs are to be merged, first some clarification needs to be done. Three general methods are given, and then many specific methods, but it should be clear which specific methods belong to which general category. The second paragraph should say more clearly which specific characteristic of the particles is important for which practical application. Also, there may be some material further up the page which should be in this section. I am unable to do this clarification myself, because I don't understand the subject. —Anne Delong (talk) 13:13, 13 October 2014 (UTC)