Talk:Pat Pattle/GA1
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 22:24, 11 October 2014 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
Saw Lysander x 2. over links I think have been done
suggest Baker asserts that the true figure could be higher, owing to the inability of post-war researchers to identify an exact figure, due to the loss or destruction of British records in the retreat from Greece or during the subsequent occupation.
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. |
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3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. |
On the basis of my "no surprises" approach to GA reviewing, at this time the article does not meet GA criteria 1a (largely due to non-compliance with capitalisation per MOS), 2b (due to an uncited paragraph containing a statement that has been challenged and four uncited claims in the table), and 6c (the licensing of two photographs). This review was placed on hold at 09:48 on 13 October UTC, and the seven days will expire at 09:48 on 20 October UTC. I hope that these criteria can be met before the on hold period expires, so that it can be listed as a GA. Regards, Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 00:33, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
- The licensing is actually correct. The claims are sourced. See the citation at the beginning of the table. Additional sources are used only used to fill in the details. The statement does not require a citation. Unless the reviewer is challenging the view the Germany invaded Yugoslavia and Greece? Dapi89 (talk) 17:04, 19 October 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dapi89 (talk • contribs)
- I note that one image has been replaced with another, and the other image has now been removed. The term "invaded" is not used, and the term "intervened" for the German attack on Greece is a clear case of WP:FRINGE in my view. The statement has now been cited (to Baker), so that point is now also now addressed. All the claims in the table have now been individually cited. I have copy-edited the article to bring it closer to MOS compliance, so that I can pass it on criteria 1a and list it as GA. If planning to take it to Milhist ACR, I suggest requesting someone from GOCE look at it. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 11:59, 20 October 2014 (UTC)