Talk:Partenope-class cruiser/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Images appropriately licensed.
- Capitalize torpedo cruiser in the infobox
- Done
- Suggest that you use ftin rather than decimal feet.
- Fixed
- Watch your rounding; 450 mm isn't 18 inches.
- Fixed
- Link displaced, fore-and-aft rig
- Done
- triple-expansion steam engines each driving a single comma after engines
- Fixed
- Explain the /43 nomenclature
- Fixed
- revised significantly, to a pair awkward
- See if the current wording is better
- 4th Division at the time but did not comma after time
- Added.
- Any mention of further activities in the articles on the war in Adriatic in the last two Warships?
- See my comment on the Goito class review. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 16:34, 20 June 2016 (UTC)