Talk:Pali-Aike volcanic field/GA1
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:17, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:17, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll copyedit as I go; please revert if I make any mistakes.
- Not an issue for GA, but [1] is a dead link.
- Remedied.
The 2.9–2.5 Camusu Aike volcanic field
: what do these numbers refer to?
- Fixed.
Patagonia is a region where three tectonic plates, the Antarctic Plate, the Nazca Plate, the Scotia Plate and the South America Plate, interact
: presumably should be four, not three, unless one is incorrectly listed.
- Fixed.
- Is there a possible link for "transtensional"? Few non-specialists will have any idea what it means.
- Now replaced with clearer wording.
rocks from Pali-Aike contain fluid inclusions of carbon dioxide
: similarly "fluid inclusion" needs a link if possible.
- As above.
Sedimentation ceased in the region 14 million years ago, probably because by that time the rain shadow of the Andes was effective in the area
: I don't follow this; sedimentation occurs where there is a body of water, so why would a rain shadow matter if the area is below sea level? Or was the sedimentation from lakes?
- From rivers; at first it was marine and later it became fluvial.
300–150 millimetres per year (0.37–0.19 in/Ms)
: what does the "Ms" mean?
- That I didn't check the output of the "convert" template; now it gives a sensical unit.
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:59, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- Fixes look good. Promoting. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 23:00, 22 February 2018 (UTC)