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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:38, 30 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:38, 30 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • "of the units" should be deleted. twelve battalions adopting military organisation of the units
  • but "they" lacked weapons but the reserve force lacked weapons
  • Don't capitalize "police": Police station unopposed
  • A company of the "Omega" special police unit
  • Croatian special police "unit", Lučko
  • We already know that they're JNA units: Cokić authorised deployment of three JNA companies,[23] of the armoured battalion of the JNA 265th Mechanised
  • Please use title case in the English-language titles of your references.
  • No DABs, duplicate links.
  • External links are good
  • NFU image has a good rationale.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:47, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]