Talk:Over (Lindsay Lohan song)/GA1

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 18:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Over is a song by American singer-songwriter and actress Lindsay Lohan ---> The song name should be in quotes
The song was written by Lohan along with the song's producers Kara DioGuardi, and John Shanks
Stylistic, "Over" is about how her boyfriend will not commit ---> What? Did you mean Lyrically?
Critically, "Over" received positive reviews from music critics, who called it "catchy". Commercially, "Over" achieved moderate commercial success worldwide ---> Ok you really need to rephrase these double repeating opening lines
with the former also providing bass, guitar, keyboards, and audio mixing ---> with the former playing the bass, guitar, keyboards, and doing the audio mixing, while the latter provided background vocals for the song
Lohan's voice spanning from C4 to C5 ---> Lohan's voice spanning from C4 to C5
You don't need the two subsections in the reception section
In the United States, the song reached on Billboard??'?s Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles for three weeks--> In the United States, the song reached on Billboard??'?s Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles chart for three weeks
Credits and personnel require en-dash
Ref 10 for UK Singles chart does not work
Correct other references per Checklinks

All done. Alex ^{talk page!} 05:30, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

We are good to go Alex. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 05:36, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]