Talk:Ottoman ironclad Asar-i Şevket/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:38, 15 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs
Images appropriately licensed.
Link scrap in the infobox
- Done
Tell the reader what kind of engine she had in both the infobox and main body.
- Done
Egyptian efforts to assert their independence angered Sultan Abdülaziz, who on 5 June 1867 demanded Egypt surrender all of the ironclads ordered from foreign shipyards. After lengthy negotiations, which also saw the Eyalet become the autonomous vassal state the Khedivate of Egypt, the vessel was formally transferred to the Ottoman Empire on 29 August 1868. Awkward.
- Trimmed the bit about the Khedivate as it's not particularly relevant - does that help?
Hobart Pasha took the fleet to the western Black Sea, I think you mean eastern
- Yup
who had come to power after a coup that involved senior members of the Navy had deposed Murad V missing a word?
- Reworded
A few duplicate links.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:47, 27 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Removed. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 17:06, 27 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]