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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • "both their club youth and professional level" Plurals for level. Done
  • "Upon moving to North American"  Done
  • Lead should also mention what he did with the Pens before he got traded. Done
  • There's some stats from his youth career that is available on the Pens' news article for the draft. Done
  • Would it be better to use his player profile on hockeylegan.se to show his debut? Done
  • "Penguins fourth line" Penguins'?  Done
  • "Injured reserve list" should be in lowercase. Done
  • Ref 17 (TB recap) doesn't his debut, maybe find another source?  Done
    • This was ridiculously difficult to find.
  • Shouldn't "day" in the day with the cup be lowercase?  Done
  • Any details on his games with Pittsburgh in 2016-17?  Done
  • Might want to link Penalty (ice hockey) for penalty kill.  Done
  • "Washington Capitals Tom Wilson" Add "player" between the team and the player name. Done
  • Charging (ice hockey) would be a good link, and lowercase the only time mentioned. Done
  • Use Skellefteå for consistency. Done
  • If he had a large contribution for the Pens during 2015-16 season, shouldn't the 2016 Stanley Cup be added to the honors section?

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 08:42, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Nova Crystallis, done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:08, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]