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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Vision then reverts Abilash back to Norm." – 'revert' and 'back' are the same thing; reword.
  • "the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms were" → "the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms was" (American English)
  • "it show's Vision's vulnerability" – typo?
  • "Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode was" → "Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode were" (American English)
  • Remove the comma after "struggled to not make it too slow" since the sentence is quite short.
  • "said unlike" sounds off. Maybe add a "that" between or rephrase.
  • "less jokes" → "fewer jokes"
  • Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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