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Reviewer: Matthew RD 02:58, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I shall be conducting this review. I hope to start soon, probably tomorrow. Thanks, -- Matthew RD 02:58, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for waiting. I'll get some reviewing done; this is how the article fairs against the GA criteria;
- Well written: See notes below
- Sources and verifiability: ✓ Pass
- Broad in coverage: ✓ Pass
- Neutral: ✓ Pass
- Stability: No edit wars, just work from the usual suspects. ✓ Pass
- Images: ✓ Pass
- "where the sets don't look like sets" should end with reference, like the last 007 film I reviews.
Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- Same for "change[d] his mind all the time, but he had to do what I wanted him to do."
Done (removed quote and re-worked sentence) - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- And the same goes for (in reception section);
- "there are moments when one yearns for a little of his louche panache."
Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- "Lazenby is that man, and his performance in superb."
Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- "and who actually dares to think that one woman who is his equal is better than a thousand part-time playmates."
Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- "but I think that it still might be the best Bond film, as many Bond cultists claim."
Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- "He looks uncomfortably in the part like a size four foot in a size ten gumboot."
Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:48, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- "there are moments when one yearns for a little of his louche panache."
- Who are the Propellerheads, what genre of music do they specialise in?
Done - SchroCat (^ • @) 18:50, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
And that's all that needs doing. Nice work so far. As always I'll place it on hold and leave you to deal with them. -- Matthew RD 18:24, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for dealing with them quickly. I'll pass it. Good job! -- Matthew RD 19:22, 14 August 2011 (UTC)