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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk message contribs count logs email) 20:13, 29 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Background and composition

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Reception

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Music video

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  • You repeated Carey/Mariah way too much! :) You should replace Mariah with Carey, and avoid the continued use of the name/surname so much. Try to replace with she or the singer when appropriate. Otherwise, this section is pretty great. I think a screenshot would be good to visually identify the most significant part of the music video. But that is your choice. :)
     Done I don't know how to upload pictures on here, but I agree that a screenshot would be really good, perhaps one with Mariah on stage with the dancers and band around her. Calvin NaNaNaC'mon! 23:35, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    Added. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 10:35, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Track listings

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Charts

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Comments

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Second look through

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Lead

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Critical reception

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Music video

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Thanks again. Have added 3 video reviews, they are quite hard to find, especially after a year, they have become even harder. Also made the Music video into 3 sub-sections. And thanks for adding in the screenshot! Calvin NaNaNaC'mon! 12:46, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome! The article looks so much better now. Outstanding work! Passing... :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 15:58, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Wooo thanks! Calvin NaNaNaC'mon! 16:01, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]