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Reviewer: EditorE (talk · contribs) 01:21, 15 February 2016 (UTC) Pretty well-done article, I have to say, but I have a few comments, though:
- "Oceania" was also covered and sampled multiple times." Really? The "Samples and covers" section of the article currently shows only one sampling of the song and only two covers. This must be a better description.
- One major point I need to address is that feel like some of the quotes in the article, including the long one in the Background and composition, the one about the Kelis remix in the remix section and Lynn Fox talking about making the music video, could be paraphrased.
- I think a screenshot of the music video would be great, but that's optional.
- The track listing section needs to have the lengths of the tracks presented.
- Ref 27: bjork.com --> Bjork Official Website
edtiorEهեইдအီးËეεઈדוארई電子ಇអ៊ី전자ഇī😎 01:21, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
- All issues
Fixed; I decided not to add a screenshot from the video, because I did not find a good one to accompany the description. Alex talk 06:53, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
- Passing. Great work! edtiorEهեইдအီးËეεઈדוארई電子ಇអ៊ី전자ഇī😎 16:19, 15 February 2016 (UTC)