Talk:Nicolas Aubé-Kubel/GA1
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 23:05, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
Review
[edit]- WL sophomore slump in the lead
- Please add and reference his bday in the early life section
- I think it is odd to begin a sentence with
2015–16
. Can it be changed tothe 2015–16 season
?- Same with
2016–17
- Same with
- I don't know if you can say
His season output was considered a disappointment by many
when the reference is just one guy (Dougherty). - Similar to my last review, please remove nhl.com from refs
- Please move reference 24 to after the comma on
on to beat the Checkers in the division finals.
I don't see why it needs to be at the end
HickoryOughtShirt?4 I believe everything has been addressed, I changed the "disappointment by many" to His performance was more modest than it had been during his junior hockey career,
, which I think is a more fair/objective assessment. Kncny11 (shoot) 20:24, 22 June 2021 (UTC)
- Kncny11, passing, good job! I would take D'Angello but I don't know if I wish to wade through all of that, sorry.HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:32, 22 June 2021 (UTC)