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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:34, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
Soon Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:34, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- The song was written → say "The track" here as you have already written "song" before
- and produced by the latter → sounds better: while production was handled by the latter
- and Ireland on 18 August 2017. It has peaked → and Ireland, while peaking within (date is not needed in the lead)
- peaking so far at number 74 → For the future: make sure to remove "so far" after the song reached its final peak
Done Ok!
- The song's music video → An accompanying music video for the song
Infobox
[edit]- The cover artwork needs alternative text
- State only "Kirkpatrick" in "Producer(s)"
Background and composition
[edit]- self-titled debut studio album → eponymous debut studio album
- extended process lead her to write and record songs → extended process led to her writing and recording songs
- and "It's about → and that "it's about
- through the iTunes Store → on iTunes
Critical reception
[edit]- called it a "breakup anthem" → also called the song a "breakup anthem"
- wrote that the record starts → "record" is generally used for albums, so please state "recording" here
Comment: "record" refers to the album; I changed "record" to "Dua Lipa" to avoid confusion
Commercial performance
[edit]- first chart-topping song in the UK. → write out to "United Kingdom"
- the following week.[34] It received a → the following week,[34] and received
- certification in the UK → remove "in the UK"
- "New Rules" has peaked within the top ten → add "further" before "peaked"
- It has so far peaked at number 74 → take my advice for the future from the lead
Done Ok!
- On the week of 4 September, it reached → use "New Ruled" here for alternation
Music video
[edit]- Henry Scholfield, who also directed → use "shot" here for alternation
- a group of flamingos into the clip because → a group of flamingos into the clip, as
- because "[The Confidante] → because "[The Confidante's]
- The video stars → The video starts
- In addition to this, the track's commercial success has been attributed to the popularity of the visual.[52][53] → You already said that, so please remove it here
- So Aliza Abarbanel of Refinery29 said → Aliza... commented on the visual,
- labeled → labelled
- Link "gay" to homosexuality
- on her YouTube account → put this after "visual"
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Unlink "Dua Lip"
Charts
[edit]- Flawless ;)
Certifications
[edit]- Flawless ;)
Release history
[edit]- Flawless ;)
Other stuff
[edit]Copy-violation
[edit]- 45.1% is too much! Please remove content from the top source
Done Reduced the content from the former top source to 36.7%
References
[edit]- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
Outcome
[edit]- You've got some writing skills, you gotta tell them to yourself. I put this
On hold; you got 7 days, I'll count 'em...
Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:54, 6 September 2017 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: I gotta tell them to myself
Haha. I have addressed your comments! Thank you so much for reviewing this article, I appreciate it greatly
Regards, --Paparazzzi (talk) 17:05, 6 September 2017 (UTC)
- Gladly passing this! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:50, 6 September 2017 (UTC)
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