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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:22, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will start this soon. JAGUAR  14:22, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Although intended to be included on first live album, Mary (2015)" - missing "his"
  • "After its release, "New Guy" received a mixed response from contemporary music critics" - why contemporary? The song isn't old so all of the reviews are recent
  • "The visual displays the duo performing the track in various rooms" - video?
  • ""New Guy" received a mixed response from contemporary music critics" - again, contemporary mentioned in the reception section
  • "She concluded by saying that she doesn't qualify that as music" - does not
  • "Much like the song, the two singers take turn performing their verse" - turns
  • No dab links
  • No dead links

Found a few typos in this one. On hold JAGUAR  14:48, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: Thanks so much. I have responded to everything. Carbrera (talk) 17:33, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for addressing all of the issues! This looks like it's ready to go now. JAGUAR  18:41, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]