Talk:Nevada-class battleship/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: - can we get this done this week? I'd like to put this to bed in 2019 and next week is slightly busier ;) Parsecboy (talk) 19:06, 16 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

And right after I nagged you about this, I got hit with some kind of stomach bug that had me mostly bed ridden...that'll show me, eh? Parsecboy (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

More like perfect timing from your wife's POV!

One DAB to Pacific Fleet, external links OK
- Fixed - where was the DAB bot when you need it?
  - There's still one in the early careers section. Since it's redundant to the one in the lede, you could just get rid of the link instead.
    - Done
Images appropriately licensed. The infobox photo looks washed out, can you fix that?
- I'll see what I can do
  - Alright, I darkened it a bit - see how it looks now.
    - Better, but a bit too dark, IMO. Not a big deal.
    - Tried something else, see if that looks better.
Link foundered in the lede
- Done
In the infobox link long ton, kW, standard; link and abbreviate nautical miles. Abbreviate indicated hp. Decide on either MW or kW. Round the draft to one significant digit everywhere.
- Should be all done
  - Missed standard displacement
    - Got it now
Be consistent about capitalizing Standard-type or not.
- Fixed
Since the deck "thicker" deck
- Done
Why "return" to steam turbines?
- The New Yorks were both VTE
  - I'd forgotten that
Comported?
- What's wrong with that?
  - Archaic term in that usage, according to my dictionary
    - I dunno that it's archaic, but I swapped it out with "aligned" anyway
In design section, link long ton.
- Done
Copy-paste error with California.
- I don't think that was copy-paste, I think that was me forgetting what ships were in the class
Was Okie given TE engines for direct comparison with turbines?
- I don't recall Friedman saying as much
Need to explain /45 nomenclature
- Added the note
Link elevation, flying-off platform, director
- Done
  - Try this link instead: [[Flight deck#Early flight decks|Flying-off platforms]]
    - Probably better to just turn it into a redirect to that for future use
They had a 3 in unclear antecedent, "The ships"?
- Done
uptakes to from
- Fixed
a series of rolling changes "rolling"?
- I suppose that's not correct in this context
cite tag in the mod section. If covered by Friedman, remove it.
- Fixed
Link to the class article for North Dakota and explain why she was scrapped before completion
- Done
At some point in 1941, she was fitted with an SC air search radar. Which ship?
- Fixed
Delete the Decommissioned column, kinda misleading as Okie was unavailable long before '44.
- True
standard type battleships were too slow add hyphen
- Done
as they were by that time the oldest battleships in service with the US Navy Incorrect. The New Yorks were older
- Doh
its homeport San Pedro, California to Missing commas
- Fixed
Ampersand for Prange.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:43, 18 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Done
  - A few things still to work on.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:35, 21 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]