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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Netherlands Antilles at the 1992 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 20:39, 21 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I'll have a look at this one, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 20:39, 21 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Initial review

Lead

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  • Unlink France. Per WP:OVERLINK, linking countries is discouraged unless there is real significance.
  • Could perhaps briefly explain why this was the Antilles' final appearance.
  • Albert Carpentier Alting is a redirect. Pipe the link if you wish to use his full name.

Background

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Bobsleigh

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  • Unlink Alting and den Dulk, both linked in the previous section.
  • Alting uses Bart here but Albert in the previous two mentions.
  • I'm viewing on mobile but, there seems to be a slightly excessive amount of space between the text and the table.

References

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  • Ref 9 needs an accessdate. Maybe I'm missing it but, I'm not sure where the date field comes from either.
  • Date formats are quite varied, for example most of the archive dates are YYYY-MM--DD but the access dates are different. Maintain one style for consistency.

I fixed two small typos alongside incase you wish to check. A couple of small issues here, placed on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 20:53, 21 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]