Talk:Neosho-class monitor/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 11:32, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- surrendered might be a little WP:EGGy. Maybe "just over a month after Union forces captured the city after a two month long siege." or something like that (though that's a little wordy).
- Done.
- surrendered might be a little WP:EGGy. Maybe "just over a month after Union forces captured the city after a two month long siege." or something like that (though that's a little wordy).
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- The last sentence in the short para in the service section, with "David Campbell 17 August 1873[5] for $13,600.[2]" - that looks rather ugly. Might you move the DANFS ref to the previous sentence and then replace the Gibbons ref with a footnote like "For the date and location of sale, see Neosho, DANFS; for the price, see Gibbons, p. 57."
- Done.
- One {{cn}} tag needs to be addressed.
- Done.
- The last sentence in the short para in the service section, with "David Campbell 17 August 1873[5] for $13,600.[2]" - that looks rather ugly. Might you move the DANFS ref to the previous sentence and then replace the Gibbons ref with a footnote like "For the date and location of sale, see Neosho, DANFS; for the price, see Gibbons, p. 57."
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Not too much to fix here, nice work as usual. Parsecboy (talk) 11:32, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:06, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- Ping.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:29, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
- Passing now. Parsecboy (talk) 11:56, 30 September 2010 (UTC)
- Ping.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:29, 24 September 2010 (UTC)