Talk:Nelson Ludington/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:12, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
Am reviewing this for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- Wikilink Upper Peninsula of Michigan
Done
Ancestry
[edit]- "William (b. 1608) and his wife Ellen (b. 1617)" - born 1608 and born 1617 respectively
Done
- Wikilink New York to New York (state)
Done
Life
[edit]- "Ludington was born January 18, 1818," - born on January 18
Done
- "His parents were Frederick Ludington and Susannah Griffeth." - Any information on their occupations?
Done
- "Ludington was the fourth of their sixteen children.[6] The youth received private schooling by tutors for his early education." - consider merging these two sentences together
Done
- "at a general store at Cold Spring, New York," - in
Done
- "and received further training in retail business." - where did Ludington receive this training?
Done
- Wikilink Great Lakes to the relevant article on its first mention
Done
- Wikilink sawmill on the first mention
Done
- Think the fourth and fifth paragraphs can be joined together
Done
- "Royce spelled it as Escanawba. That was entered with the state in 1863 as the legal name for the town." - think these two sentences could be combined
Done
- "simplifying the spelling. [18]" - the extra space between the period and the citation is not needed
Done
- "the main docks and lumber yards of the firm were at Milwaukee." - in
Done
- "the main docks and lumber yards of the firm were at Milwaukee. It was the main distribution point to places throughout the United States via shipping on the Great Lakes."
- Think merging these portions of text will help matters here
Done
Marriage and family
[edit]- "Ludington died January 15, 1883," - died on January 15
Done
- Perhaps mention he died from a short-term illness
Done
Legacy
[edit]- The two bulletpoints should not exist and the information contained within them be in ordinary prose
Done
References
[edit]- All mentions of newspapers.com should begin with a capital letter
Done
- Reference 12 is missing the author
Done
- Referecnce 25's page number should be in its own field not in the work field
Done
- Reference 29 is missing the access date and publisher
Done
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 19:55, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
Working --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:34, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:09, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
- @Doug Coldwell: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:22, 10 October 2020 (UTC)