Talk:Nelda Lee

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Wiki Education assignment: TYS 295 NewMedia_YouMedia

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 January 2023 and 11 May 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yvonneshang, Craig0828, Egbow, Smassis (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Fionna888 (talk) 19:29, 9 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed Changes

We're a group of college students working on developing this page as part of the Women in Red initiative.

- We are planning on expanding the education and intro. We rather use ours instead of the previously written Wiki page

- We plan to add photos 17:14, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction: We propose inserting the following two sentences as the second and third sentences of the introduction section: " Lee was the first woman to log one and a half hours of flight time in the F-15 eagle. She has been “recognized as a trailblazer in aerospace engineering and aviation”.

Education: We want to retain the essential facts currently in the education section, but we would like to retitle it "Early Life/ Education". Additionally, we propose adding the following expanded information with sources: "Nelda Lee was born and raised in Carrollton, Alabama. Lee attended Auburn University, located in Auburn, Alabama, and graduated the class of 1969. She received her bachelors in Aerospace Engineering, and was the second woman to graduate with an aerospace engineering degree at Auburn University. Lee also received a masters degree in 1999 from Webster University in Management and Human Resources Development." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 7:37, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply] Egbow (talk) 18:20, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

What are your sources? Schazjmd (talk) 18:24, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Egbow, also, "following in the direction of her father's legacy" is puffery, particularly as there is no other mention of her father in the article, so please do not include that. Schazjmd (talk) 21:36, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your advice. We removed the phrase about her father and once we publish our official page you will see our sources. Egbow (talk) 17:03, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]