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Notability of published works

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Some of the published works listed are of dubious notability. For example the articles in Alert Diver "Diving Dry - Thermal protection for extreme conditions" and "http://www.alertdiver.com/What_is_Rebreather_Forum_3_All_About" and the Wilderness medicine magazine article "Flying after diving" are close to trivial. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 12:45, 1 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Why is Neal Pollock notable?

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The lead paragraph makes no mention of why the subject is notable. The world has many divers, academics and Canadians, None of these characteristics make a person particularly notable, even in combination. The lead should establish notability in some way.

• • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 13:11, 20 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Please refer to the Wikipedia:Manual of Style and Wikipedia:External links and clean up the in-line links. If they are important as external links, put them in the section External links. If they are references, format them as references, otherwise they may be deleted. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 05:52, 23 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]