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This is a press release

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This article reads like a press release. Perhaps it should be re-written by someone not affiliated with Presto Industries?

Formatting

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After skimming the article, I'd recommend that it be broken down into various headers; it's a rather long section altogether. - Iotha 04:03, 3 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio

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The reason this reads like a press release is because it's written by the company. It reads nicely and could use some breaking down into sections, but it should instead be removed, since it's a copyvio taken from here. Tomertalk 00:00, 29 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

OK, done. Tomertalk 00:03, 29 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]