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108.28.104.57 (talk) 16:59, 23 July 2019 (UTC)LS 7/23/19[reply]

Entire page overhauled with new information based on NDIA website. Lrstalter (talk) 18:31, 23 July 2019 (UTC)LS 7/23/19[reply]

Corrected capitalization of terms like "association" and "chapter", which should be lowercase. —Eyer (If you reply, add {{reply to|Eyer}} to your message to let me know.) 18:41, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Lrstalter: Why do you keep changing the capitalization of "association", "chapter" an other terms? These should be lowercase, per MOS:INSTITUTIONS and MOS:SECTIONS. For example, one might say "the Central Florida Chapter" (proper noun), but "all chapters" (common noun). —Eyer (If you reply, add {{reply to|Eyer}} to your message to let me know.) 19:08, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Eyer: NDIA capitalizes "the Association" when referring to itself, a proper institution, to avoid confusion and for emphasis. The same goes for its Chapters, Divisions, Affiliates, etc.

@Lrstalter: NDIA may choose to capitalize those terms in its own documents, but they cannot be capitalized here, per Wikipedia's manual of style. Once you are done with your current edits, I will be happy to go through the article and make all of the necessary corrections. Just let me know. —Eyer (If you reply, add {{reply to|Eyer}} to your message to let me know.) 19:25, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Lrstalter: I've made the appropriate corrections and removed most external links. As it appears you may have a conflict of interest in editing this article, I'll be happy to assist in making further corrections. Please request corrections on or suggest content for this article using the link in the yellow box at the top of this page. Best wishes. —Eyer (If you reply, add {{reply to|Eyer}} to your message to let me know.) 19:45, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]