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GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will undertake this review tomorrow. --K. Peake 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Super, thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:22, 18 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
    • Thanks.
  • "and mimics the rhythm" → "and mimicking the rhythm"
    • Done.
  • "and certainly pretended to play it" → "certainly pretending to play it"
    • Done.
  • Use double speech marks instead for "screw"
    • Done.
  • Add a sentence mentioning Fred Åkerström's recording at the end of the lead, as this is notable
    • Done.

Background

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  • Good
    • Noted.

Epistle

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Music and verse form

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  • Add relevant text to the audio sample to justify its usage
    • Done.
  • Wikilink cello
    • Done.
  • Pipe 2
    4
    time to Duple and quadruple metre
    • Done.
  • Wikilink timbre
    • Not done, the article is about the quality of a tone, not the meaning here.
  • "on the 3rd and 4th lines," → "on the third and fourth lines," per MOS:NUM
    • Done.

Lyrics

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  • Img looks good!
    • Noted.
  • "It is subtitled" → "The composition is subtitled" to avoid overusage of it
    • Done.
  • Remove commas around Paul Britten Austin
    • Done.
  • Versions of the start of Epistle No. 2 → Starting lines of Epistle No. 2
    • Done.

Reception and legacy

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Notes

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  • Shouldn't there be sources for the info of the notes since they are not mentioning anything corresponding with refs next to them?
    • Added.

References

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  • Copyvio score is undetectable at 0%!!!!
    • Noted.
  • Shouldn't ref 10 be cited in place of ref 6 since that also invokes p. 63?
    • Noted, but ref 6 is more specific, which is better for its task.
  • Cite Bellman.net as publisher instead on ref 9
    • Done.
  • WP:OVERLINK of Fred Åkerström on ref 15
    • Done.
  • Pipe WEA Records to Warner Music Group and fix WP:OVERLINK of Fred Åkerström on ref 16
    • Done.
  • Pipe Sterling to Sterling Records (Sweden) on ref 17
    • Done.

Sources

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  • Good
    • Thanks.
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  • Shouldn't you write on YouTube after the links to the videos?
    • Done.

Final comments and verdict

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