Talk:Mystery Dungeon: Shiren the Wanderer/GA1
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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 10:23, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
My plan: sleep, review, contemplate existential crises, review some more. Cognissonance (talk) 10:23, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]"The game was met by" — Improve prose: "The game was released to"."best in its genre and its platform" — Improve flow: "best in its genre and platform".
Gameplay
[edit]"The player can move in eight directions, and can attack with melee weapons and arrows, and use items with a wide range of effects" — Improve flow: "The player can move in eight directions, attack with melee weapons and arrows, and use items with a wide range of effects"."some heal the player, some are used to fling away enemies, and some allow the player" — Improve flow: "some heal the player or are used to fling away enemies, with others allowing the player".
Development
[edit]"who made more use of East Asian elements compared to his more European-styled" — Remove one of the uses of "more".
Release
[edit]"making it too different would make it lose the original's flavor" — Minimize repetition: "making it too different would lose the original's flavor"."The game's cover art" — Minimize repetition and make more accurate: "The box art".
Reception
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Overall
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall: The notes were so insignificant that I edited them myself. Immediate pass.
- Pass/Fail:
- @IDV: Cognissonance (talk) 22:15, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Cognissonance: Thank you. I wonder, though, what do you mean when you say that box art is more accurate than cover art? I thought they were mostly synonymous.--IDVtalk 22:28, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- @IDV: You're right. I simply took it from the Cover art article and prefer it to the generic version. Cognissonance (talk) 22:45, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Cognissonance: Thank you. I wonder, though, what do you mean when you say that box art is more accurate than cover art? I thought they were mostly synonymous.--IDVtalk 22:28, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- @IDV: Cognissonance (talk) 22:15, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: