Talk:Myōjin Yahiko/GA1

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I am promoting the article to a GA status because I feel it passes the above. If you disagree please feel free to seek a reassessment. Great job Tintor2. MS (Talk|Contributions) 15:24, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review ^_^.Tintor2 (talk) 15:26, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Lead

• You should change "practise" to "practice". I'm basing this off of google hits and some user might be confused, IMO. I was at first.
• English-language should not be linked, see WP:OVERLINKING. I believe people who use the English Wikipedia would know what the English-language is.
• Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū should be in the nihongo tag. Since you have the translation for his other attacks, you should add the translation for Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū.
  • Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Creation and conception

• I noticed that this section doesn't have that many sources. Does the one source provided in this section for each paragraph cover the whole section?
  • Yes, The author has a whole page to talk about the creation each character from the series.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
    • Well could you use the <ref name=" "> thingy to cite some the sentences?

• • • • Done, (I think so).Tintor2 (talk) 15:08, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Character outline

Personality

• A source for "Tokyo Samurai" would be great. Also since it is a title it should be in quotes, not apostrophes.
• Since Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū is mention here first it should be in the nihongo tag.
  • Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Techniques

• Take Kamiya Kasshin-Ryū out of the nihongo tag.
  • Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Reception

• Second not 2nd.
  • Done.Tintor2 (talk) 12:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Once the concerns above have been addressed contact me and I'll decided whether it passes or fails. MS (Talk|Contributions) 01:52, 19 June 2009 (UTC)