Talk:Muppet*Vision 3D/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:11, 3 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

The image of the ride in the infobox needs an alt image description; please add one

Lead

Paragraph 1

"The show, however, completely unravels when Dr. Bunsen Honeydew's experimental 3D sprite, Waldo, causes mayhem during the next portion of the show." --> "The show, however, completely unravels when Dr. Bunsen Honeydew's experimental 3D sprite, Waldo, causes mayhem during an accompanying portion of the show."

Paragraph 3

Things that are mentioned in the lead, such as a great bulk of the third paragraph, need to be included in the article as well

Queue

No grammatical errors, but...

There are absolutely zero sources in this section?

Cast

No sources?

Performers

Again, no sources
"Additional performers include; ..." --> "Additional performers include: ..."

References

Reference #11 needs (Month Day, Year) dates instead of (Day Month Year) dates

End of GA Review:

Although this article is at a good length, there are zero sources in the "Queue" section, a section where I believe you need some. Also, the lead's third paragraph discusses several things that are not even mentioned in the article. I will place this on hold for seven days to allow for some additional citation and references. Thank you. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 20:59, 13 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]

@Carbrera: give me a few days to work on this, as I have a test tomorrow. --Elisfkc (talk) 18:01, 14 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Failed due to inactivity for over a week. Please renominate this again in the future and I'll gladly review it. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 21:31, 20 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]