Talk:Move (Third Day album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 18:43, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• No issues

Lead

• The band wanted the album to be a departure from the modern rock stylings of Revelation... → Put year in parentheses for album "Revelation"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 00:03, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Background and recording

• Move was Third Day's first record without guitarist Brad Avery, who left the band after the recording of their previous album (Revelation). After he left the group, the band felt they were at a musical crossroads; although they considered replacing Avery, they ultimately decided not to. → Verifiable?
  • Yes, it is verified with citation number five which ends the preceding sentence. Toa Nidhiki05 00:03, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Composition

• No issues

Critical reception and accolades

• No issues

Release and sales

• No issues

Singles

• No issues

Track listing

• No issues

Credits and personnel

• Fix disambiguation issue with "Chamberlain", as noted by this
  • Corrected word. Toa Nidhiki05 00:03, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Charts

• No issues

References

• References 2, 3, 4 → "Radio and Records" and "VNU Media" should not be wiki-linked, as they were earlier
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 00:51, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
• Reference 7 → Publisher is "Salem Publishing"
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 00:51, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
• Reference 9 → "CCM Magazine" and "Salem Publishing" should not be wiki-linked
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 00:51, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
• References 23-42 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media" should not be wiki-linked
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 00:51, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues and reference formatting errors that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these issues and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 19:14, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing the article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 01:19, 23 June 2012 (UTC)