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Nice new article! Wording: perhaps "one of the 1848 revolutions" rather than "part of the 1848 revolutions"? doncram (talk) 01:53, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Also, the sentence that the 2nd propose hook relies upon runs on a bit, and it is a little confusing about the number of points rejected, is it 2 or 3? Currently: "Sturdza received the petition-proclamation on 9 April and agreed to 33 of its 35 points, rejecting those that concerned dissolution of the general assembly and the formation of a national guard, also, it appears, objecting to the abolition of censorship." Perhaps better (but i do not want to change meaning or make it inaccurate so not sure if this is right): "Sturdza received the petition-proclamation on 9 April and agreed to 33 of its 35 points, rejecting those that concerned dissolution of the general assembly and the formation of a national guard. Also, it appears, Sturdza seems to have objected to the abolition of censorship, which was not one of the 35 numbered demands." Really, it is a nice new article, and it seems too bad how it worked out. doncram (talk) 02:05, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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