Talk:Mississippi Highway 612

Mississippi Highway 612 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: January 4, 2017. (Reviewed version).

U.S. Roads: State highways / Mississippi Mid‑importance

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Locations	Mississippi
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GA Review

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Reviewer: Cameron11598 (talk · contribs) 23:40, 3 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Will start shortly --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:40, 3 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Good work just a few minor things to correct.

It is reasonably well written.
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Good luck improving the article!

Comments

The start of the route description section could be worded better to make the topic clearer.
"At Red Creek Church Road, MS 612 travels southeast and into a larger forest"
- Not sure you need the "and"
"small forest" "larger forest" (in the route description section)
- Which forests?
History Section
- MS 612 was established in 1966, and it was part of a construction project in 1967, with a total cost of $611,248
  - Almost seems like a run-on sentence could probably be separated for better flow.
- The route has not been changed significantly since.[9][10]
  - Sentence Fragment

--Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 00:05, 4 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed all of them I think. The forest doesn't have a name. It's just a group of trees.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 23:52, 4 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good! --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:54, 4 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]