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Reviewer: 9 months waiting, I'll take it Tbhotch (talk · contribs ) 00:26, 26 January 2019 (UTC) [ reply ]
Erick (talk ) 00:49, 26 January 2019 (UTC) [ reply ] © Tb hotch ™ en-2.5 ). 03:59, 26 January 2019 (UTC) [ reply ] WP:WIAGA for criteria
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Resolved comments from Tbhotch
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Length - It says 38:55 but the tracklisting adds 38:32 Lead "Los Angeles, ..." ... "London, England" -> Pick either "Los Angeles, California" and "London, England" or "Los Angeles" and "London"
Unlink LA, London and England per WP:OVERLINK
Link "Amor 3x" to its article
"neither a critical or a commercial" -> shouldn't it be "nor"?
"It reached number one" -> "Additionaly, it reached number one" Background "Produced by Armando Manzanero and arranged by Bebu Silvetti," -> change it to active voice
"and was the first record" -> "recording"(?)
"released" is used 4 times in the paragraph
"record" is used 9 times as a noun and twice as a verb Musical style ""Cómo Duele" and "Al Que Me Siga" composed by" -> "Cómo Duele" and "Al Que Me Siga", composed by Promotion Link Billboard
"To promote Mis Romances, Luis Miguel" -> You have written his second name only throughout
The second single, "Cómo Duele" -> The second single, "Cómo Duele",
"number one song" -> number-one song
Link Chula Vista, CA
"shows in the United States .[34] Miguel's concerts in the United States ... After his performances in the United States .
on 14 December 2002 in the Dominican Republic -> DR is linked but it was previously mentioned at "Dominican Republic and Puerto Rico"
The Los Angeles Times -> The Los Angeles Times
and its predecessors as well as pop tracks -> and its predecessors, as well as pop tracks Reception "noting Miguel's rendition of "Perfidia" had been covered by several artists" -> This line is unclear
"that while the album's production was "bolstered" by Miguel's vocals, she called it "predictable"" -> I suggest to rewrite it.
"Fernando Gonzalez wrote for The Washington Post highlighting" -> he wrote what ?
The second paragraph uses "record" 4 times See also List of number-one Billboard Latin Pop Albums from the 2000s -> List of number-one Billboard Latin Pop Albums from the 2000s References 2 - Allmusic should not be in italics
3 - Directes -> Diretes
Sources 1 and 4 should look like 1956 Winter Olympics#References and 1956_Winter_Olympics#Further reading
6 - Alfonso Quiñones (author) is missing
11 - Link Chicago Tribune
12 - Unlink Chicago Tribune
15 - Allmusic should not be in italics
17 - Allmusic should not be in italics
27 - La Prensa (Buenos Aires) -> La Prensa (Panama City)
31 - Link El Universal
39 - Link Los Angeles Times
40 - Link Chicago Sun-Times and Sun-Times Media Group
41 - Unlink Chicago Sun-Times and Sun-Times Media Group
44 - Link United Press International; it should not be in italics
54 - Reyes, Salvador Franco -> Franco Reyes, Salvador
55 - Cámara Uruguaya de Productores de Fonogramas should not be in italics
61 - "los medios no quieren cubrir sus conferencias de prensa y un buen sector" -> drop "y un buen sector" as meaningless (or the paragraph from "Cansados de" as irrelevant to the page).
62 - Allmusic should not be in italics
63, 64 and 65 - Billboard is overlinked
6, 52, 59 - They have translated titles, but other Spanish language sources don't. Choose one style.
Article on hold. © Tb hotch ™ en-2.5 ). 03:59, 26 January 2019 (UTC) [ reply ]
Erick (talk ) 17:03, 30 January 2019 (UTC) [ reply ] Erick (talk ) 18:53, 1 February 2019 (UTC) [ reply ] © Tb hotch ™ en-2.5 ). 01:06, 2 February 2019 (UTC) [ reply ] 
