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Good articleMirror (Sigrid song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
August 29, 2022Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Mirror (Sigrid song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:20, 27 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I will crack on with this one tomorrow! --K. Peake 20:20, 27 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Mention in the first sentence that it is from her second studio album, How to Let Go (2022)
  • "from her second studio album, How to Let Go (2022); marking" → "from the album, marking"
  • The writing sentence should be the second of the lead, followed by the inspiration one and then release
  • ""Mirror" touches on themes" → "it touches on themes" but should there really be a comma before the last theme?
  • "Its instrumentation consists of" → "The instrumentation consists of" swapping this with the above sentence because comp comes before lyrics
  • "Sigrid came up with" → "She came up with"
  • "Commercially, it reached" → "Commercially, the song reached"
  • Wikilink music video
  • "premiered alongside the single. It depicts" → "premiered alongside it. The video depicts"
  • "Sigrid performed "Mirror"" → "Sigrid performed the song"
  • "She also included the song" → "She also included it"

Background and release

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Composition and lyrics

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  • ""Mirror" has been described" → "Musically, "Mirror" has been described"
  • Should there really be a comma before self-love?
  • Swap [11] and [12] so they are in a corresponding order with the info
  • "Sigrid wrote it following" → "Sigrid wrote the song following"
  • Stylize as i-D instead
  • "who you are."" → "who you are"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "claimed that the song is" → "asserted that the song is"
  • Remove the "darts and flutters" part because that is not appropriate for comp
  • "to the forefront."" → "to the forefront"."
  • Pipe chorus to Refrain
  • "Jason Lipshutz writing for Billboard asserted" → "Jason Lipshutz, for Billboard, asserted"
  • "and declares "I love" → "and declares, "I love"
  • "in the mirror!"." → "in the mirror!" since this ends the quote

Reception

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  • The release year of Future Nostalgia is not in the quote; maybe end it earlier to add this and also mention it being a Dua Lipa album?
  • I don't think the Smith review should be the second one since others focusing on the disco sound are more suitable for thematic order
  • "improvements and recalibrations."" → "improvements and recalibrations"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "the song's bridge is "an homage" → "the song's bridge is a "homage"
  • Instead of English publication before DIY, write a reviewer for
  • Do something similar to the above instead of writing British radio station before Capital FM
  • "49 in the United Kingdom and 76" → "number 49 in the United Kingdom and number 76"

Music video and live performances

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  • Wikilink music video
  • "Sigrid is performing various activities," → "Sigrid performs various activities,"
  • Stylize as i-D instead
  • "stated that "for [her] it's" → "stated, "For me, it's" to make it clear this is quoting his point of view
  • Remove British music television show introduction to Later... with Jools Holland
  • "She gave a performance of "Mirror" on 16 July 2021 during" → "Sigrid gave a performance of "Mirror" on 16 July 2021 for" but remove the introduction to The One Show

Track listing

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Good

Year-end charts

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  • Year-end chart performance → 2021 year-end chart performance

Release history

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References

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Final comments and verdict

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