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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 18:03, 16 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 18:03, 16 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • External links are good
  • No DABs.
  • Lead is a bit too short. I think you expand it a bit.
  • I would like to see more sources added to the article.
  • Note marriage in the prose and (probably) in the lead.

More comments later.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 18:18, 16 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Several hundred prisoners were killed..., "several hundred" should be replaced with "two hundred" because it said 1,400 men were sent to Cuba and 1200 were imprisoned.
  • Link Cuba, lung cancer, CIA, espionage, and Soviet Union.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 18:34, 16 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
    Comment:I’ve expanded the introduction, added two sources, added a section about Miskovsky’s marriage in the article, corrected the law school title, clarified the number of Cuban insurgents killed and added wikilinks as appropriate. Spirit of Eagle (talk) 07:10, 18 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Few more comments: