Talk:Mike Capel/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 16:35, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"605 overall pick in the 1980 MLB Draft, but " 605th, also link the draft.
- Fixed the "th". The draft is linked in the lead, should I link it again?
"Cubs with the 320 overall pick" 320th. Also, is there anything out there about his being drafted rather late? Given his record and where he pitched it's surprising to me that he was outside the top 100.
- Fixed 320th. I can't find anything on why he was drafted that late... I would assume it has something to do with the arm injury, but I can't find sources for it.
"When Al Nipper was supposed to become the Cubs fifth starter on April 23, Capel was to be called up to take his spot in the bullpen" could this be reworded? I think I get what it's trying to say but it's still confusing, especially since he was brought up to the Majors two weeks later so I don't know how he was there already.
- Reworded.
"top of the 11 inning." 11th
- Fixed.
"to the Toros prior 1992 MLB season" prior to the
- Added.
"In March 1988, Capel used dipping tobacco and had a non-cancerous lesion removed from his lip; according to Capel, he started using the drug 12 years earlier and was trying to quit" This should be moved around a bit; start with noting his original dipping tobacco use and moving on to the lesion.
- Reworded.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when issues are fixed. Wizardman 18:17, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 23:16, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]