Talk:Mickey Rocco/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this. MWright96 (talk) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• no dab links

Early life and career

• Who is Helen Harwell?

Major league career

• "On September 9, 1945 Rocco" - missing a comma here
• "After the season the Boston Red Sox" - ditto
• The Yankee Stadium wikilink should be to Yankee Stadium (1923)
• "In a team-leading 143 games, he had a .264 batting average, 10 home runs, and 56 RBIs." - This needs to be referenced

Later life

• "He died in his hometown of St. Paul, Minnesota on June 1, 1997 at the age of 81." - This statement doesn't have a reference.

References

• no dead links

Good work so far. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 19:36, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

Issues mostly fixed. Harwell was his wife, didn't really find any other information on her other than the name; not sure what else I could add to that sentence. Wizardman 12:59, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

• • Thank you for clearing up the point on his wife. Happy to promote this to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 13:34, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

Great, thanks for the review! Looks like I'll have to start writing articles again, all got reviewed now :) Wizardman 13:40, 20 August 2016 (UTC)