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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk04:56, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Micah Joseph Lebensohn
Micah Joseph Lebensohn

** ALT1:... that Micah Joseph Lebensohn translated works into Hebrew from German, Italian, French, and Polish? Source: [2], [3], [4]

5x expanded by Ploni (talk). Self-nominated at 02:04, 14 October 2021 (UTC).[reply]

  • Thanks for reviewing! I may not have the chance to work on it for the next while, so feel free to reject the nomination if I haven't 5× expanded it within 10 days after the initial expansion. –Ploni (talk) 01:04, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
GA on 26 October, long enough 4796 char, cited, neutral, no apparent copyvios (Earwig notes use of titles and quotes), image appears to be freely distributable, QPQ done. Hook 0 is 88 char, is cited in the article and verified in the source above. Hook 1 is 99 char, but is not cited in the article. (This source says he translated from French, German, and Polish, while this one says he translated Vittorio Alfieri's Saul, but it does not specify that it was originally written in Italian. But the languages he translated from are not listed in the article.) Striking hook 1. GTG with 0. SusunW (talk) 14:23, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

To T:DYK/P3

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Micah Joseph Lebensohn/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Nominator: Ploni (talk · contribs) at 13:51, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll attempt to review this. Comments soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA criteria

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

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  • Mention in the prose the date of his birth and death.
  • In the biography section, we start by writing about his teenage: As a teenager, Lebensohn, ..., then we move back to age 12,and began to translate poetry into Hebrew at the age of twelve ..., then back to teenage: At the age of sixteen he.... Make it chronological.
  • By the late 1840s, Lebensohn discovered the first symptoms of tuberculosis. – Not sure what "first symptom" is. Better to write it as "early symptoms of tuberculosis"
  • he attended the philosphy lectures of Schelling at the university – Is it a typo, or you intended to write is as "philosphy", not "philosophy". Also, suggesting to rephrase as "he attended the philosphy/philosophy lectures of Schelling at the Humboldt University of Berlin"
  • 'Prayer, Daughter of Hearts.' – full stop outside the single quotation (MOS:QUOTEMARKS) Please correct me if I am wrong
  • among other works.[11][5] – Ref 5 should be before 11.
  • on the death of M. A. Günzburg.[11][7] – Same as above. 7 should be before 11.
  • In the Jewish Encyclopedia (1904), Herman Rosenthal and Peter Wiernik [Wikidata] write that – "[...] wrote that"
  • File:Micha Josef Lebensohn.jpg – How can we claim that the author died 70 years ago, when we don't know who the author is? When was it first published.
  • Rest seems fine. Nice work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:50, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! Happy to pass then. Good work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:08, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.