Talk:Mic Drop (song)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 17:28, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Because of your work on "Lost in Your Light", I will be taking this on. Excited to review it! LOVI33 17:28, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33, thank you for taking this on. Anticipating your comments. --Ashleyyoursmile! 17:47, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• "cover for Steve Aoki remix featuring Desiigner" → "Cover art for Steve Aoki remix featuring Desiigner"
• Instead of having two separate sections for the music videos in the infobox, just have one section titled "Music videos" and both videos under it titled "Mic Drop (Steve Aoki remix)" and "Mic Drop (Japanese version)". See Be the One (Dua Lipa song), for reference.
• "picked it as a standout track," on the EP? If so, change to: "picked it as a standout track, on Love Yourself: Her."
• "Love Yourself World Tour (2018-19)." → "Love Yourself World Tour (2018–19)."

Background and release

• Looks Good!

Music and lyrics

• "musician Steve Aoki (pictured) produced" → "musician Steve Aoki (pictured) produced", on img text

Critical reception

• "received generally favourable" → "was met with generally favourable"
• "Reviewing for Clash magazine," → "Reviewing for Clash,"

Accolades

• Year-end lists → Year-end lists for "Mic Drop"
• "Critic/Publication" → "Publication", since all are from companies/websites
• "Ref." → "Ref.", using Template:abbr
• Center citations in ref column
• Remove italicization on YouTube Rewind

Commercial performance

• "December 4-10, 2017" → "December 4–10, 2017"

Music videos

• Looks Good!

Live performances and other usage

• Looks Good!

Track listings

• Remove the writers and producers as they are listed below in the Credits and personnel section

Credits and personnel

• Target liner notes to itself

Charts

• Looks Good!

Sales and certifications

• Change to "Certifications and sales", for alphabetical order.
• Ditto for table caption

Release history

• Looks Good!

Notes

• Looks Good!

References

• Make sure all these are archived.
• Copyvio score looks good at 24.8%.
• All refs look good.

External links

• Looks Good!

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold for now. Great job on this! Extremely well written. LOVI33 02:27, 5 August 2020 (UTC)

• LOVI33, extremely happy to have responded to all your comments. Please let me know if I missed out anything else. Thank you so much for the review! --Ashleyyoursmile! 04:41, 5 August 2020 (UTC)

• Great, That's a pass! LOVI33 15:42, 5 August 2020 (UTC)

• LOVI33, Many thanks for this! --Ashleyyoursmile! 17:10, 5 August 2020 (UTC)

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