Talk:Mi Tierra (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

You deserve another review, so here it is! --K. Peake 09:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Add a comma instead of in after the studio name in the infobox
• "and the artist with her husband" → "and the artist, with her husband"
• "handling its production. It was" → "handling the production. The song was"
• Add a comma after music critics
• "Commercially, it topped the" → "Commercially, the song topped the" because this is a new para
• Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
• "on several European countries. " → "on several European countries' listings."
• "by Alberto Tolot features the artist" → "by Alberto Tolot and features Gloria Estefan" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
• ""Mi Tierra" received several accolades including the" → ""Mi Tierra" received the" since it only won these three awards
• Shouldn't this sentence be the first of the para instead?
• "at the Billboard Latin Music Awards and" → "at the Billboard Latin Music Awards, and" also, you should mention that the first two were in 1994 and the second was in 1995
• Remove the Puerto Rican singers introduction, as this is not needed in the lead

Background and composition

• Wikilink Gloria Estefan
• Pipe Latin to Latin music
• Pipe salsa to Salsa music
• "by her son, Nayib;" → "by her son Nayib;"
• "by Estefan's husband, Emilio Estefan, and" → "by Gloria's husband Emilio Estefan and" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
• "of the album's songs including" → "of the album's songs, including"
• ""Mi Tierra" is a" → "Musically, "Mi Tierra" is a"

Critical reception and accolades

• "called it "genius"." → "called the song "genius"."
• "On the club remix, he said it's" → "Of the club remix, he said it is"
• Italicise The Daily Vault
• "it was the only track" → ""Mi Tierra" was the only track"
• "called it a" → "called "Mi Tierra" a"
• "rated it three out of five," → "rated the song three out of five," and mention stars if this is the ratings system used
• Remove pipe on Latin
• Shouldn't you write Record Mirror instead of RM?
• "described it as" → "described the song as"
• "It was acknowledged as" → "The song was acknowledged as"

Promotion and commercial performance

• "was directed Alberto Tolot" → "was directed by Alberto Tolot"
• Shouldn't you write 14th instead of fourteenth studio album?
• "in 1994 where she" → "in 1994, where she"
• The Latin Recording Academy → the Latin Recording Academy per MOS:THEMUSIC
• "In the US, it reached" → "In the United States, the song reached" per MOS:US
• "it reached numbers one and five on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and the Billboard Hot Dance Club Songs charts ." → "the song reached numbers one and five on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and the Hot Dance Club Songs charts, respectively."
• "number seventy-seven on" → "number 77 on" per MOS:NUM
• Pipe Media Control to GfK Entertainment charts
• "twenty-seventh on the" → "27th on the"
• Pipe Mega Single Top 100 to Dutch Single Top 100
• "in Netherlands and thirty-sixth" → "in the Netherlands, and 36th"

Formats and track listings

• Retitle to Track listing since there is only one format or listing here

Charts

• Good

Personnel

• Move this to being the section directly before charts

See also

• I don't think Billboard Hot Latin Songs Year-End Chart is necessary

References

• Copyvio score looks fabulous at 17.4%!!!!
• Pipe Epic to Epic Records on ref 1 instead of ref 23
• Remove the publisher from refs 4 and 5
• Wikilink Newspapers.com on ref 8 instead of ref 13
• WP:OVERLINK of Sun-Sentinel on refs 8 and 30
• Ref 9 should cite last name followed by first and middle
• Billlboard → Billboard on ref 10 and pipe to Billboard (magazine), plus author-link Larry Flick
• Cite The Daily Vault as work/website instead on ref 11
• Cite Pittsburgh Post-Gazette on ref 18
• WP:OVERLINK of Music Week on ref 19
• Cite Univision as the sole publisher on ref 20 instead
• Cite YouTube in the via parameter instead on ref 24
• Wikilink Telemetro on ref 28
• WP:OVERLINK of Univision on ref 29
• Cite Media Control as publisher instead and pipe to GfK Entertainment charts on ref 33
• Pipe Mega Single Top 100 to Dutch Single Top 100 on ref 34, also why so many publishers?
• Pipe Official Charts Company to Official Charts on ref 35

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; slick job here once again! --K. Peake 10:15, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

  Thanks as always for the review. For the charts refs, I just decided to just reuse the refs from the chart tables (which is what I should've done in the first place!). Erick (talk) 18:59, 22 January 2023 (UTC)

  Magiciandude You missed the first three points of infobox and lead. Clarifying the first, I meant to write Crescent Moon Studios, Miami, Florida. --K. Peake 16:12, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, I saw your mention through the article page and everything has been implemented! --K. Peake 07:07, 27 January 2023 (UTC)