Talk:Merrick Boulevard buses/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:18, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:18, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (5.7% is highest.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links N:

  Ref 51: " "Bee Bus Line Will Use New Jamaica Station: To Remove to $1,500,000 Terminal Tuseday Night". New York Herald Tribune. August 10, 1936. Retrieved July 1, 2015." is dead.

  It's 403 Access Denied due to its being subscription-only, so I've removed the 403 link. epicgenius (talk) 15:23, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

• Originally operated by Bee-Line Inc. and later the North Shore Bus Company until 1947, all four routes are now operated by MTA Regional Bus Operations under the New York City Transit brand. suggest you change to The routes were originally operated by Bee-Line Inc., and later the North Shore Bus Company until 1947, but are now operated by MTA Regional Bus Operations under the New York City Transit brand.
• Buses along the corridor operate out of the Jamaica Bus Depot on Merrick Boulevard near Jamaica Center. suggest merging this with the preceding paragraph.
• @Epicgenius: That is all my suggestions. I will pass as soon as the dead link is fixed or replaced. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:50, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
  • @Iazyges: I have fixed both of the prose issues you have brought up. epicgenius (talk) 15:23, 19 March 2018 (UTC)