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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:14, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I'll wipe this one out, since it has been in the queue over a month. --K. Peake 07:14, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Replace flastlist and hlist with bullet points
  • should be removed as there is a sourced genre
  • WP:OVERLINK of Madonna under songwriters
  • "from Madonna's fourteenth studio album" → "from the former's fourteenth studio album,"
  • "The song was written by Madonna, Mirwais, Maluma and Edgar Barrera, while production was handled by Madonna and Mirwais." → "The song was produced by Madonna and Mirwais, who wrote it alongside Maluma and Edgar Barrera."
  • ""Medellín" is named after" → "The song is named after"
  • "which Maluma was born," → "in which Maluma was born,"
  • "song with elements of" → "track with elements of"
  • "and dance-pop which lyrically finds the singers" → "and dance-pop. Lyrically, it finds Madonna and Maluma"
  • "a trip to the aforementioned city." → "a trip to Medellín."
  • "as well as an improvement over" → "while noting it as an improvement from"
  • "also compared it with Madonna's previous Latin-inspired songs," → "also compared the song to Madonna's previous Latin-inspired releases,"
  • Remove the 1987 single bit since you only need the title of the song in the lead
  • ""Medellín" failed to enter the Billboard Hot 100, but became" → "the former became"
  • "47th chart-topping hit" → "47th chart topper"
  • "the top 10 on the digital charts in Finland and Portugal, as well as in Colombia and Venezuela." → "the top 10 in Colombia and Venezuela, as well as on the digital charts in Finland and Portugal."
  • "The accompanying music video for "Medellín" was" → "The accompanying music video was"
  • Remove introductory info about who the directors are
  • "in April 2019 during a live" → "in April 2019 as part of a live"
  • "It featured several scenes" → "It features several scenes"
  • "The music video was critically appreciated by critics who noted resemblances with" → "The video received acclaim from critics, who noted resemblances to"
  • "at the 2019 Billboard Music Awards; the performance featured" → "at the 2019 Billboard Music Awards, with the performance featuring"
  • "provided by augmented reality," → "that were provided by augmented reality,"
  • "was later included on the setlists of Madonna's" → "was later performed during Madonna's"

Background and release

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  • "meeting artists, such as painters and musicians, who" → "meeting artists; painters and musicians, who"
  • Add the fact that she revealed the album title as Madame X
  • Add Mike Dean and Diplo info under the album working info
  • Mention that she met Maluma backstage
  • "The singer mentioned that she" → "Madonna mentioned that she"
  • "but still having a connection to the music he" → "though still have a connection to the music that he"
  • "started commenting and adding things," → "began to comment and add things,"
  • Remove Forbes interview per WP:RSP
  • "announced "Medellín", featuring Maluma, as" → "announced the Maluma collaboration "Medellín" as"
  • "from her fourteenth studio album Madame X, and" → "from Madame X and"
  • "after Madame X was released" → "after the album was released"
  • "after she realized that Maluma loves horses, as she does." → "after realizing that he loves horses, which they bonded over a mutual love for."
  • "The singer also described Maluma as" → "The singer described Maluma as"
  • ""great to work with"" → ""so great to work with""
  • "as well as" → "while also adding that he is"
  • "to say about him"." → "to say about him.""
  • "where she also was" → "where Madonna was also"

Composition and lyrics

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  • "of the opening track "Medellín", featuring Madonna and Maluma singing bilingual verses in the chorus." → "of the chorus to "Medellín", featuring Madonna and Maluma singing bilingual verses." on the audio sample text
  • The text can be expanded, plus you need to add ref(s) on it
  • "was written by Madonna, Maluma, Mirwais and Edgar Barrera, while production was handled by the singer and Mirwais." → "was produced by Madonna and Mirwais, with the producers writing the song alongside Maluma and Edgar Barrera."
  • Are you sure the above sentence belongs in Composition and lyrics?
Yes. I don't think it belongs anywhere else. Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The song is named after" → ""Medellín" is named after"
  • [10] should be at the end of the sentence before [11][12]
  • "song with elements of" → "song, with elements of"
  • "being centered around" → "which is centered around"
  • "According to the sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group," → "According to sheet music published by Musicnotes.com,"
  • "is set in common time with" → "is set in the time signature of common time, with"
  • Target key to Key (music)
  • "and follows a basic sequence of" → "following a basic sequence of"
  • "as its chord progression throughout its verses." → "in its chord progression throughout the verses."
  • "begins the song whispering the verses" → "begins the song by whispering the verses,"
  • "while delivering" → "while she delivers"
  • "style, and later singing" → "style and later sings"
  • "someone I've never been"." → "someone I've never been.""
  • "then begins his part singing in Spanish asking" → "then begins his part by singing in Spanish, asking"
  • "At one point he references Madonna's hometown, Detroit:" → "At one point, Maluma references Madonna's hometown of Detroit:" with the appropriate wikilink
  • "know where to go"." → "know where to go.""
  • "Madonna is heard singing about how" → "Madonna sings about how"
  • "and for once does not have to hide herself." → "and does not have to hide herself for once."
  • "reaches its chorus, the artists sing" → "reaches the chorus, the musicians sing,"
  • "with a "deep house" → "alongside a "deep house"
  • "the city's violent past as the home base" → "Medellín's violent past from when it was the home base"
  • "hovering above us"." → "hovering above us.""

Critical reception

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  • "Upon release, "Medellín" was met with" → ""Medellín" was met with"
  • "commenting that it" → "commenting that the song"
  • "Charlotte Gunn called it a" → "Charlotte Gunn called the song a"
  • Target pop to Pop music
  • "her best work" → "[Madonna's] best work"
  • "and expressed that" → "and expressed the opinion that"
  • "it’s a sultry and promising" → "it's a sultry and promising"
  • "to Madonna’s latest" → "to Madonna's latest"
  • Target single to Single (music)
  • "harmonies", that "balance" → "harmonies" that "balance"
  • "On his review of the song, Owen Myers for The Guardian," → "In his review of the song, Owen Myers of The Guardian"
  • "concluded that it was a" → "concluded that the song was a"
  • "ranked it the third best song" → "ranked it as the third best song"
  • "and deemed it" → "and deemed the song"
  • "'American Life', but with time [...] one" → "'American Life'", though with time, called it "one"
  • "opined that it was" → "opined that the song was"
  • Target Vulture to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • "as well as an updated version" → "while also viewing the song as an updated version"
  • "called it a" → "called the song a"
  • "Maluma‘s sultry, symmetrical" → "Maluma's sultry, symmetrical" on the quote box
  • "at April’s BBMAs" → "at April's BBMAs"
  • "don’t always work" → "don't always work"
  • "there’s genuine," → "there's genuine,"
  • End the quote box by mentioning what placement it was at on the list
  • "it was an" → ""Medellín" was an"
  • "and praised the singer's lyrics for showing a more vulnerable side." → "with him praising Madonna's lyrics for showing a more vulnerable side to her."
  • "He said that despite seemingly" → "Welsh said that despite seemingly"
  • "On his review of Madame X, Jeremy Helligar for" → "Jeremy Helligar from"
  • "said "Medellín" was a" → "said "Medellín" is a"
  • "concluding that the singer" → "admitting that the singer"
  • "this last part being" → "with the last part being"
  • "though it didn't count with an" → "though it lacks an"
  • "it did have an" → "the song has an"
  • "While reviewing the album, El Hunt from" → "El Hunt from"
  • ""recalls Hard Candy's 'Give It 2 Me'"." → ""recalls" Madonna's single "Give It 2 Me" (2008)."
  • "Mike Wass from Idolator considered" → "Wass considered" but why does he have two reviews in the same section?
  • "from The Irish Times, praised its" → "from The Irish Times praised the song's"
  • "opined it was one" → "opined that the song is one"
  • "gave a mixed review, and" → "gave a mixed review of the song and"
  • "she still sounded" → "the singer still sounded"
  • "who truly stood out;" → "who truly stood out, writing that"
  • "The author concluded her review by referring" → "Concluding her review, Mapes referred"
  • "was less favorable, opining that" → "in a less favorable review, opined that"
  • "A more negative review came from the" → "In another negative review, the"
  • "Chuck Arnold, who dismissed" → "Chuck Arnold dismissed"

Commercial performance

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  • "chart, pulling further ahead of" → "chart, increasing her lead on" on the img main text
  • "debuted at number one on Billboard's" → "debuted at number one on the Billboard"
  • "with two days of sales" → "after two days of sales"
  • "selling 5,000 digital copies." → "with sales of 5,000 digital copies."
  • "at number 35 on the" → "at number 35 on the US"
  • "becoming Maluma's second song to enter the chart." should say it was her second to enter the chart since "Bitch I'm Madonna" in 2015 since that is the truth
  • "reached number seven," → "reached number seven on the chart,"
  • "reached the top in the week" → "reached the summit of the Dance Club Songs chart on the week"
  • "becoming her 47th and Maluma's first number-one" → "becoming Madonna's 47th and Maluma's 1st number one" per MOS:NUM on comparative values
  • "further ahead of runner-up" → "further ahead of the runner-up"
  • "had 33 number-one singles at that time." → "had 33 chart topping singles at the time."
  • "at number 34 on the" → "at number 34 on the US"
  • "chart, on the week" → "chart, for the week"
  • "it reached its peak of" → "the song peaked at"
  • "in Belgium's Flemish region" → "in the country's Flemish region"
  • "on the charts registering songs just" → "for the charts registering songs that are"
  • "at number eleven" → "at number 11"
  • "while reaching number three in" → "while it reached number 3 on"
  • digital songs → Digital Songs
  • "also peaked at number nine in" → "peaked at number nine on the charts in"
  • "eventually reaching number 37" → "and eventually reached number 37"
  • "received a gold certification by" → "received a gold certification by the"
  • "for sales of 25,000 copies" → "for sales of 25,000 units"
  • "peaking at number 67," should mention the name of the chart it peaked on
  • "reaching number 69." should do the same as the above is instructed to
  • "on the UK Singles Chart, spending only one week on the chart, for the issue dated May 2, 2019." → "on the UK Singles Chart for the issue dated May 2, 2019, spending only one week on the chart."
  • You need a source that verifies it only spent a week on the chart; maybe cite Madonna's chart history from OCC?
  • "It also charted at number 15" → "It further charted at number 15"
  • "on the Argentina Hot 100 chart, while it reached the top" → "on the Argentina Hot 100, while it reached the summit" but are you sure the Airplay chart is notable?
Removed Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "It also reached the top 10" → "The song also reached the top 10"
  • "on the Spanish airplay chart, eventually" → "on the Mexico Espanol Airplay chart, ultimately"
  • Mention how many weeks later it reached the position
  • "additionally reached number 17 in Panama and five in Venezuela." → "additionally reached number 17 and 5 in Panama and Venezuela, respectively."
  • "on China's airplay chart, on its first issue dated" → "on the China Airplay chart for its first issue, dated"
  • "reaching number 73 on the Japan Hot 100 chart." → "reached number 73 on the Japan Hot 100."

Music video

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Development

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  • Retitle to Background and development
  • "(right) during the world premiere of the music video on MTV's London studios" → "(right) during the world premiere of the music video at MTV's London studios." on the img main text
  • "The accompanying music video for "Medellín" was filmed" → "The accompanying music video was filmed"
  • "It was directed by" → "The visual was directed by"
  • "noted that she was influenced by same" → "noted that the director was influenced by the same"
  • "that she was interested in," → "which she was interested in,"
  • "was premiered on April 24, 2019," → "was released on April 24, 2019,"
  • Target MTV UK to MTV (British and Irish TV channel)
  • "special presented by" → "special which was presented by"
  • "which Madonna participated in from MTV's studios" → "that Madonna participated in from the channel's studios"
  • "fans participated via satellite from New York City, Milan and São Paulo and" → "fans took part from New York City, Milan and São Paulo via satellite, and"
  • "to ask the singer" → "to ask Madonna"
  • "Bruce Gillmer, global head of Viacom, and co-brand" → "Bruce Gillmer, the global head of Viacom and co-brand" with the wikilink and target
  • Wikilink MTV International
  • "for the premiere." → "for the video's premiere."
  • "a team led by stylist" → "a team led by the stylist"
  • "Ib Kamara with styling consultant" → "Ib Kamara, alongside styling consultant"
  • "by New York-based designer" → "at the New York-based designer"
  • "as a tribute to Graham," → "as a tribute to Martha Graham," with the wikilink
  • "decorated with a red X," → "that was decorated with a red X,"
  • "and floor-sweeping tan" → "as well as a floor-sweeping tan"
  • "brand Polomo Spain, during" → "brand Polomo Spain during"
  • "even though" → "explaining despite how"

Synopsis

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  • "Screenshot of the "Medellín" music video showing" → "A screenshot of the "Medellín" music video, showing" on the img main text
  • This section needs citations
  • "about her struggles and hope" → "about her struggles, as well as hope"
  • "She says she had seen too" → "Madonna says she had seen too"
  • Wikilink God
  • "the spirit of her mother protecting her." → "being protected by the spirit of her mother."
  • "are interrupted with black and white shots" → "are interrupted by black and white ones"
  • "and a long velvet dress," → "that accompanies a long velvet dress,"
  • "riding a horse." → "who is riding a horse."
  • "As she says," → "While she says,"
  • "The song then starts playing, with the singer" → ""Medellín" then starts playing, with Madonna"
  • "with Maluma being her" → "and Maluma is her"
  • "follow with them in bed" → "follow that show them in bed"
  • "takes place, in the style" → "takes place in the style"
  • "invading the party stomping" → "invading the party by stomping"
  • "in a wedding dress," → "while she wears a wedding dress,"
  • "made out of pins." → "that was made out of pins."
  • "they engage in a" → "the two engage in a"
  • "but the scene is cut to" → "but the scene cuts to"
  • "with Madonna dancing at the party scenes" → "with scenes of Madonna dancing at the party"
  • "dancing around a horse is shown." → "dancing around a horse are shown."
  • "they ride off together" → "the two of them ride off together"

Reception

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  • "called it a" → "called the music video a"
  • "featuring a" → "noting that it features a"
  • "the video a" → "the video an"
  • "complimented its" → "complimented the video's"
  • "featured in the video were reminiscent of" → "featured were reminiscent of the"
  • "Maluma", and" → "Maluma" and"
  • "and calling it" → "and he called it"
  • ET CanadaEntertainment Tonight Canada
  • "called "Medellín" a" → "called the clip a"
  • "Madonna and Maluma's throughout" → "Madonna and Maluma's chemistry throughout"
  • "and observed resemblances with" → "while observing resemblances to"
  • "work, but said that" → "work, despite admitting"
  • "past videos such as" → "past videos, such as"
  • Target Vogue UK to Vogue (magazine)
  • "noted resemblances with Madonna's" → "noted resemblances to Madonna's"
  • "while stated that the cowboy" → "while stating that the cowboy"
  • "for her albums Music (2000) and" → "for her albums Music and"
  • "Idolator's Mike Wass also compared" → "Wass also compared"
  • "commented that "Medellín" was" → "commented that the video was"
  • Jezebel is a blog so remove it

Live performances

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  • "the song live for the first time during the Billboard Music Awards" → "Medellín" live for the first time at the 2019 Billboard Music Awards"
  • "on May 1, 2019." → "on May 1 of that year."
  • "It featured four virtual versions" → "The performance featured four virtual versions"
  • "Also present were elements such as a" → "Elements also present included a"
  • "being the first time" → "marking the first time"
  • "capture, and game engine" → "capture and game engine the"
  • "to a creative company called Sequin," → "to the creative company Sequin"
  • "augmented reality:" → "augmented reality;"
  • "camera and a wireless" → "camera, and a wireless"
  • "Attendees at the awards show" → "Attendees of the awards show"
  • "As Maluma appears wearing" → "As Maluma appeared while wearing"
  • "the stage transforms into a patio restaurant, and they dance together" → "the stage transformed into a patio restaurant, and they danced together"
  • "with Maluma removing" → "including Maluma removing"
  • "gained a increase in streams, rising by 261% in" → "rose by 261% in"
  • "2.2 million (up from 596,000)." → "2,200,000, increasing from 596,000."
  • "calling it" → "calling the performance"
  • "eventually won the Best Use of AR in" → "ultimately won the Best Use of AR in the"
  • "Madonna also performed" → "Madonna later performed"
  • "included on the" → "featured in the"
  • "of Sun Sentinel," → "of the Sun-Sentinel," with the wikilink
  • "it was performed during select dates of" → "the song was performed for select dates during"

Track listing

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  • Retitle to Track listings
  • Remixes Pt. 2Remixes, Pt. 2

Credits and personnel

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  • Why is this section non-existent?
Forgot to create it. Done Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

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Weekly charts

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What do you mean? Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Are you sure the Airplay chart for Argentina should be included?
  • Should both Columbia charts be included or only one?
Both are considered official Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Target HRT to Hrvatska radiotelevizija
  • Is the chart France Downloads or France Download?
  • The Israel peak is not displayed by the archive currently
I removed it since I couldn't find any more sources Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Year-end charts

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  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION
  • The Portugal chart is not titled appropriately since it is the streaming one
  • Remove the US Latin digital charts per WP:USCHARTS

Certifications

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  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Release history

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  • Ditto
What do you mean? Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the sortable options for the columns
  • The versions, such as Remixes and Erick Morillo mix, should have a separate column dedicated to them; for the initial ones, cited the version as Original
  • Wikilink Erick Morillo
  • (Remixes Pt. 2) → (Remixes, Pt. 2)
  • Wikilink Robbie Rivera

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Archive all of these by using the tool
  • Copyvio score looks decent at 39%
  • Remove or replace ref 5 per WP:RSP
  • Retitle ref 16 to 'Medellin' Sheet Music (Piano Solo) in Ab Major
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 21, 23, 24, 68, 72, 73, 82, 83 and 85
  • Ref 26 should cite Vulture as work/website with no wikilink though
  • Target HRT to Hrvatska radiotelevizija on ref 49
  • MOS:CAPS issues with refs 51 and 52, while the former is missing the language parameter
  • Ref 53 is missing an accessdate
  • Remove wikilink on Monitor Latino for ref 60
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 74 and cite YouTube as publisher instead
  • Remove wikilink on Paper for refs 79 and 99
  • Cite Entertainment Tonight Canada instead for ref 81 and it should be work/website
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 84 and target Vogue UK to Vogue (magazine)
  • Remove or replace ref 86 since it a violation of WP:SELFPUB
  • Ditto for ref 88
What do you mean? Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Target Oprah to O, The Oprah Magazine on ref 91
  • Remove wikilink on Vogue for ref 93
  • Citations regarding the remixes of "Medellín" → Citations regarding the digital release of the remixes EP of "Medellín": on ref 104
  • Wikilink Apple Music on the first mention under ref 104
  • The countries that have the titles in foreign language for the Apple Music releases should be retitled appropriately; the France release for example, and this also applies to ref 107
  • Citations regarding the Robbie Rivera Juicy Mix of "Medellín": → Citations regarding the digital release of the Robbie Rivera Juicy Mix of "Medellín": on ref 105
  • Citations regarding the Erick Morillo Mix of "Medellín": → Citations regarding the digital release of the Erick Morillo Mix of "Medellín": on ref 106
  • Citations regarding the remixes EP part 2 release of "Medellín" → Citations regarding the digital release of the remixes EP part 2 release of "Medellín" on ref 107
  • Ref 108 should cite National-Report as publisher with no wikilink
  • Remove BBC Radio 2 from the title of ref 123

Final comments and verdict

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  •  On hold until the issues are fixed, though do not feel afraid to question me over any issues with implementing the changes if I have suggested things that may not be correct. --K. Peake 17:42, 18 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake I have addressed almost all issues, see above. Alex reach me! 17:44, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
11JORN Thanks for that, the issues with MOS:TABLECAPTION are where you have not added captions to tables like they should be; take a look at recently passed-GA songs to understand what this is. As for any cases where I put ditto, that meant to do the same as the change suggested above. --K. Peake 17:52, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
11JORN It has been sometime and you have still not responded, but the article is very close to meeting the criteria; will you make the fix soon? --K. Peake 07:43, 31 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake Hello! The user hasn't been active for quite some time so I hope it's not a problem if I jump on this to solve the few remaining issues, I don't want this article to be failed due to inactivity. I added the captions as per MOS:TABLECAPTION, and the last issue was a ref that violated WP:SELFPUB. Could you please point once again what it was? Because they were switched. - Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 08:36, 2 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gabrielflorin01 Yeah I was thinking that about the inactivity too; this can pass if you fix it and the Engadget ref is the WP:SELFPUB violation in question above. Thanks for showing commitment to taking over, that's useful. --K. Peake 09:14, 2 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Replaced the ref with another. Unfortunately, I had to remove some info as it was some sort of exclusive interview and there's no other source to cover it. - Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 10:12, 2 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gabrielflorin01 Thanks a lot,  Pass time has come! --K. Peake 20:32, 2 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]