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GA Review

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I am the reviewer--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 04:47, 4 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Working on the song
  • reaching number one in countries such as -> Re-word

Background and recording

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  • commented she liked the track -> that

Composition

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Looks good

Critical reception

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  • 2003 MTV Music Video Awards.".
  • Dorian Lynskey of The Guardian noted the it as -> Noted it
  • denounced the track as a "'Into the Groove' redux -> an

Chart performance

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  • It was Spears 10th chart hit, as well as the first of her entries that she had co-written -> You haven't mentioned her co-writing the song yet. I think is its her first, its something worth mentioning in previous sections.
  • since "Love Don't Live Here Anymore" -> You should provide the year.
  • On the issue dated November 29, 2003, "Me Against the Music" peaked at number thirty-five -> Issues of what?

Music video (development)

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Looks good.

Synopsis

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Looks good.

Release and reception

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Looks good.

Live performances

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  • she performed in American music show TRL -> on the
  • at Staples Center. -> at the

Cover version

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Looks good.

Overall, really good job! Every article you do gets better and better :).--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 15:52, 4 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:25, 4 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good job! I'm passing it.--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 00:11, 5 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]