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Gangsters or mobsters?

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Which category is correct? May need to rename the article accordingly. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 10:16, 14 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Article needs better flow

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I don't know if it is just the nature of the editing process but this article does not flow logically from a beginning to an end. It needs some sort of organization either by time or by person, or both, starting with birth and upbringing, introducing all the family members first, so the reader is introduced to all the brothers before moving on to talk about their activities. Similarly, for the other characters, introduce then discuss, not the reverse. A better flow will make the notability and importance of this article more obvious. Meanwhile, I have rated as being of start quality and of low importance. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 10:34, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]