Talk:Mauricio Pellegrino

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Current position

The infobox says that he's at Inter, the article states that he's at Liverpool. He can't be at both. danno 02:14, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Copy edit

This article still needs a complete overhaul and was clearly written by a non-native English speaker. It would probably be quicker to say what is correct, but the following phrases/sentences are not good use of English:

After playing nearly one decade with
he spent the vast majority of his remaining career
amassing La Liga totals
with which he won
he conquered nine in his spell in his country (I have no idea what that means)
had a six-month stint
he embarked in a managerial career
during a large portion of the 90's
lived its golden era
He had his first abroad experience
would be fairly used during the campaign
ended with league conquest
with the addition of
His main dark spot
he was a very important defensive unit
amassed 213 official appearances
having an unassuming stint
picked for the squad
made his debut precisely
stayed connected
who still had Benítez in charge
a position in which he remained
as the pair moved
as the team had just promoted to the top flight
he qualified the team for the final
a 1–0 aggregate defeat

I am probably being rather picky, but there are several other sentences which are sloppily written.77.130.195.16 (talk) 05:58, 20 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Honours list

As the article makes reference to the large number of titles that he has won as a player, it would be good to have this added to the article (properly referenced of course). 77.130.195.16 (talk) 05:59, 20 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]