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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:59, 24 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:59, 24 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • Images appropriately licensed
  • The lede is excessively detailed. I suggest dropping the ship's names.
  • Done.
  • Clarify that poverty prevented him from joining the Army and lack of education the clergy.
  • Done, although I wouldn't quite call it poverty!
  • Having subsequently continued in Burford, This seems redundant
  • Removed.
  • Any reason given for the translation from Burford to Russell? No promotion involved and not a more prestigious ship, AFAIK.
  • Nothing in particular. Would assume needs of the service, the death of a lieutenant opening a spot that needed to be filled or similar.
  • Link decommissioning
  • Already linked in early career section.