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A fact from Maurice Rossel appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 November 2018 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Doing... Hi, will review this article in the next few days.
General comments: Article looks ripe for promotion. Is there a reason why there isn't an infobox / image?
I could not find any obituaries for him, so it is possible that he is still alive (more likely, his family did not publish an obituary because history has not looked on him kindly). He was last seen in 1997, but BLP still applies and I can't upload a fair-use image under Wikipedia policy. The biographical details are also pretty scant, so I'm not sure there's enough substance for an infobox. Thanks for reviewing! Catrìona (talk) 02:44, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I want to give a suggestion on how the sections could be organized. The first section covers his early life and then talks about his life after the Holocaust, and then the following sections go back in time to talk about his visits to the camps. Wouldn't it be better to have the article flow chronologically? Something like Early life and career → Theresienstadt visit → Auschwitz visit → Life after the Holocaust (which would include subsections like the A Visitor from the Living → Impact and assessment → and Later life, like the details of him burying his memories and illness in 1997).
This article is a biography, so having a section called "Biography" is not very useful, in my opinion. Breaking the sections down in the order of when they occurred in his life would be helpful for our readers.
That's fair. The problem is that the article is very unbalanced because RS coverage focuses very narrowly on a couple days of his life, and I thought there wasn't enough biographical information to justify multiple sections, but I've changed the organization based on your suggestions.
Rossel later visited Auschwitz concentration camp, but did not notice the murder of more than 1,000 prisoners that day. – Doesn't the Red Cross dispute this and say he visited a few days before (per the footnote)? Is it generally accepted that he indeed visited the camp on the day those prisoners were murdered? If we are going to include this in the lead we need most sources to agree on that.
I would say that it is generally accepted, because Karny is a well respected historian and he actually investigated it. The ICRC webpage cites no sources for the date, and the most likely explanation for a discrepancy is a typo on their part. However, because of the BLP issue I've changed the lede.
@Catrìona: Just wanted to comment on the refs in the lead and direct quotations. MOS:LEADCITE says quotations in the lead require inline citations, but from my understanding, it can be interpreted as requiring a source elsewhere (in the sections), since the following paragraph says editors should avoid adding redundant refs in the lead. Take a look at today's FA: Gevninge helmet fragment. It has a few direct quotes in the lead, but since they are cited elsewhere, the refs are not required in the lead. Hope this helps for future articles of yours! MX (✉ • ✎) 21:49, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
His main motivation to join the Red Cross was apparently to avoid a posting to the Swiss border guard – Was this something he claimed? The word “apparently” may throw off readers as speculative. If this is something he said/wrote, mention that.
Reflects the wording in the source, but is cited to A Visitor from the Living so is presumably Rossel's claim; changed appropriately.
each time visiting several camps – not an expert in this field, but would “concentration camps” be more accurate? Perhaps this might be useful for the first mention, and then “camp” in future mentions.
Specified prisoner of war camps.
put him into contact to prisoners who were aware – “… put him in contact with prisoners who were aware…”?
Fixed
After the war – I would say, “After World War II, ..."
It is unclear to what extent the Red Cross valued making an accurate report on Theresienstadt, - Since you’ve been using ICRC all along, I would use that instead of Red Cross. Make sure to be consistent in other mentions too.
Done here, but in many places "Red Cross" is used for a more general reference, for instance including Rossel and the Danish repesentatives, who were affiliated with the Danish Red Cross.
The information was also confirmed by the Vrba-Wetzler Report about the same time as Rossel's visit. – I would say “around the same time” but feel free to keep your phrasing if you think it is better.
by several senior SS officials – write: “by several senior Schutzstaffel (SS) officials”, since it is their first introduction
Done
and give the visitors fabricated statistical data on the camp – gave
Changed to "to give"
such as the picture at right of children playing – Not sure what “at right” means
Attempting to clarify that this is the same picture which is included in the article, which was probably at right when I wrote the sentence. Changed wording to "above".
Rossel does not express regret or embarrassment over the report – Did not express
Done
When asked if he stands behind his findings, Rossel answers that he does – “... if he stood … answered that he did”
Done
states that he remembers the color of the Auschwitz commandant's eyes (blue) but nothing about Paul Eppstein – “stated that he remembered”
Done
titled A Visitor from the Living (French: Un vivant qui passe). – Can we redlink this per WP:REDLINK?
It's a topic notable enough for its own article, but currently redirects to Maurice Rossel#A Visitor from the Living per Wikipedia redirect policy, so it won't redlink.
Source 40 and 41 – Why are they not formatted like the others? Consider doing the format you used for "Theresienstadt 2018" and "Theresienstadt: Red Cross Visit 2018"
Done
Schur, Herbert (1997). "Review of Karny, Miroslav, ed., Terezinska pametni kniha". Retrieved 16 September 2018. – Requires publisher
Done
Clines, Francis X. (June 24, 1999). "A Holocaust Bloodhound Gently Tracks a Target". The New York Times. p. E00001. Retrieved 15 September 2018. – Fix date to "24 June 1999" to keep consistency
1990s deaths – How do you feel about removing this category since he is not confirmed dead? Per WP:BDP, he is covered until he's 115 years old. If he was born in 1910, he's still close to 108. In addition, how did you get the circa 1917? Was his aged mentioned at some point? We can use a age convert template for that.
There's somewhat conflicting information on Rossel's exact age:
NYT article: "as he looked back to Theresienstadt from the vantage of 1979, when he was a comfortably situated 60-year-old"[1]
Farré and Schubert have him 27 years old in 1944, which is probably more reliable.
@MX: Farré, Sébastien; Schubert, Yan (2009). "L'illusion de l'objectif" [The Illusion of the Objective]. Le Mouvement Social (in French). 227 (2): 65–83. doi:10.3917/lms.227.0065. Thanks! Catrìona (talk) 21:40, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Doing... Hi, will review this article in the next few days.
Fixed
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