Talk:Matrilineal society of Meghalaya/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:07, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- No copyvio/dablink issues
- 1 deadlink [1]
- Fixed
- Lead
- It is "practise" not "practice"
- Done
- No citations needed in lead unless you say something controversial
- Removed citations from the lead to main body with some text
- Background
- Khasiis are an ancient tribe "Khasi"
- Yes, done
- Rights, roles and responsibilities
- The birth of a girls is celebrated while the birth of a son is accepted "girl". I think you should say "simply accepted" to emphasise the point
- Done
- They enjoy total security, unlike the rest of the country Sure these are the words of the source? And say "in the rest"
- Done
- A successful career women of this society Meaning?
- Clarified
- matrilocal and duolocal Meaning?
- Wiki link for "matrilocal" and explanation for "duolocal" provided
- The youngest daughter of this society, the Ka Khadduh, inherits the ancestral property Repeated earlier in the section. Mention this there
- Done
- (3,000 members[5]) Place the ref outside the bracket
- Shifted
- equal rights discrimination against men Error? This part has no clear meaning
- Corrected
- In a Meghalaya Legislative Assembly of 60 members, there are only four women Mention the year this data pertains to
- Year specified.Nvvchar. 02:41, 30 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. All issues have been addressed. Please see if any more corrections are needed.Nvvchar. 02:41, 30 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:51, 30 June 2016 (UTC)