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first sentence is too dense

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In its current forms, the first sentence is too dense and full of jargon. In order to understand the first sentence, you have to already know the field. I suggest a rewrite to produce an introduction that is more friendly to outsiders and neophytes. After the opening is fixed, then the rest could also be rewritten. Who is the intended audience? Pete unseth (talk) 19:49, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]