Talk:Mary, Queen of Hungary/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:03, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 15:03, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:44, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Borsoka: I am reviewing some articles now, including this one:

Lead

seven days after Louis I's death Is this the same as Louis the Great? We should stick to any one name throughout the article.
Link regency as done in the main text

Childhood

Mary was born in the second half of 1371 Better write the "latter half"
her paternal grandmother, Elizabeth Give her full name so that she is not confused with Elizabeth of Bosnia.

Restoration and capture (1386–1387)

Can "knighted" be linked?

Her husband's co-ruler (1387–1395)

The injuries the queen sustained were fatal --> The queen succumbed to the fatal injuries
The lead does not mention how Mary died

Images: It is incredible that we do not have an image of Sigismund of Luxembourg in this article.

That should be all. An enjoyable read. Good luck! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:56, 28 March 2016 (UTC) @Sainsf:, I highly appreciate your review. Thank you for it. I hope I fixed the above problems. Please contact me if further actions were needed. I think there is an image of Sigismund (I refer to his seal, which is the last picture). Borsoka (talk) 18:25, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your response. I believe this article is ready to be a GA. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 11:48, 31 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]