Talk:Marvel Swimsuit Special/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 03:28, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

Starting review Kingsif (talk) 03:28, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

@Kingsif: Hi, just wanted to inquire about the status of this review. Do you know when you'll be able to continue? Morgan695 (talk) 16:12, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

@Morgan695: When I remember I didn't finish it - I had it on a watch so it wouldn't have been much longer, but thanks for the ping! Pasted review below, sorry for the wait! Kingsif (talk) 16:33, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

@Kingsif: Hi, edits have been made. Morgan695 (talk) 19:24, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

Style

• Lead could be a little longer, based on the overall length of the article
• Development section written well - fluid and nice
• Need a ref for "parody advertisements and fake interviews" sentence - I checked sources so I imagine it's in one of the nearby refs, but for ease, this warrants one at the end.
• Not sure the Marvel Swimsuit Special #1 description should be presented as an 'e.g.' Perhaps replace as "One was the Marvel Swimsuit Special #1, which is set..." - or similar.
• Coming off this, see coverage comment
• Reception section good
• Revivals section good
• Needs attention one little thing

Coverage

• Lead gives good coverage
• Good coverage of development
• May need some more coverage in Content, specifically having descriptions of the other comics as well as Marvel Swimsuit Special #1.
• Good coverage of reception; perhaps a bit light on critics (only 4, though the series was prolific) but seems representative enough
• Seems to use all available info about revivals
• Needs attention one little thing

Illustration

• Good use of table
• Good idea to illustrate gender equality; good selection of appropriate images for it
• Pass

Verifiability

• Sources look good
• Slight concern over Comicbook.com, but it seems reliable for what it is being used to source
• Pass

Stability

• History squeaky clean
• Pass

Neutrality

• Looks clear
• Pass

Copyright

• Check looks clean
• All images fair use, with solid reasoning for each
• Pass

Overall

on hold - see notes. Very close, just a few little things. Kingsif (talk) 16:33, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

Nice work! Kingsif (talk) 21:03, 3 November 2019 (UTC)